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This week’s story is inspired by Appalachian folklore and the kinds of mountain warnings passed down through generations.
The rain started as a nuisance and turned into something else entirely somewhere past the last gas station.
Josh and I had spent the weekend hiking a stretch of trail in the Smokies that I’d been wanting to do since spring, and we were driving home tired and happy, windows cracked to let the mountain air in, Cooper sprawled across the back seat with his head hanging over the console. It had been a good trip. That’s the part I keep coming back to. It had been a good trip right up until it wasn’t.
The sky went the color of a bruise around four in the afternoon, and by four-thirty the rain was coming down so hard the wipers couldn’t keep up. Josh leaned forward over the wheel, squinting through the windshield, and I watched the GPS reroute us twice, then a third time, pulling us off the main road and onto something narrower. Older. The kind of road that doesn’t get repaved so much as remembered.
“You sure about this?” I asked.
“It says it’s faster.”
“It’s a dirt road, Josh.”
“It’s faster,” he said again, like repeating it would make it true.
Cooper started pacing in the back seat. He’s not a pacer. He’s a good travel dog, the kind who curls up and sleeps through six-hour drives without a complaint, but that afternoon he wouldn’t settle. He kept standing up, turning in a circle, lying back down, standing up again. I reached back to scratch his ears and he pulled away from my hand, which he never does.
“He probably just doesn’t like the thunder,” Josh said.
I told myself that was probably true.
The SUV slid on a curve about twenty minutes later, the back end fishtailing on mud that had gone from road to river, and we went into the ditch hard enough that the whole vehicle tipped, driver’s side dropping until we were sitting at a lopsided angle, my door practically facing the sky. Josh tried to reverse us out. Then tried again. The tires just spun, throwing up mud, the engine whining uselessly, the whole cab groaning every time he touched the gas.
“No service,” I said, looking at my phone.
“None on mine either.”
We sat there a minute, listening to the rain hammer the roof, the car canted so steeply I had to brace a hand against the dash just to stay in my seat. I remember feeling more annoyed than scared at first. Annoyed that our nice weekend was ending like this, annoyed at whoever programmed that GPS route, annoyed that I was going to have to climb out of my own door like it was a hatch on a submarine.
Then I saw the house.
It was set back through a stand of trees, maybe a quarter mile off the road, an old farmhouse with a sagging porch roof and windows that caught what little light was left in the sky. I almost missed it. If lightning hadn’t flashed at just the right second, throwing the shape of it into relief, I don’t think I’d have seen it at all.
“There,” I said, pointing. “Maybe whoever lives there has a phone. Or a truck. Somebody who could pull us out.”
“Better than sitting in this thing all night,” Josh said, glancing at the angle of the dash. “I can’t even imagine trying to sleep like this.”
“Or climb in and out of it every time one of us needs to pee,” I said, and he laughed despite everything.
“We’ve got the tent and the sleeping bags in the back,” he said. “If nobody’s home, we camp. Better than breaking our necks trying to get in and out of a car parked sideways in a ditch.”
Cooper started whining the second I said it. Not barking. Whining, low and steady, his ears flat against his skull.
“Guess the house gives him the creeps too,” Josh said, laughing a little as he clipped the leash on. “Hopefully whoever’s out here still has a landline. Or at least a truck with a chain in the bed.”
I laughed too. I want to be honest about that. I laughed, because it was funny, because Cooper is scared of vacuum cleaners and thunder and the neighbor’s inflatable Halloween decorations, and I didn’t think for one second that his instincts were worth trusting over a warm, dry roof.
We should have listened to the dog. I know that now.
The closer we got, the less I liked the look of the place. The porch roof sagged in the middle like it had given up holding itself together years ago, and half the shutters hung crooked, one dangling by a single hinge. The yard had gone completely to weeds, tall enough to soak our jeans through as we pushed past them.
“This doesn’t look like anybody’s home,” I said. “Look at the state of it.”
“Maybe they just don’t keep up with the yard,” Josh said, though even he didn’t sound convinced.
We climbed the porch steps half-jogging, rain soaking through everything, and Josh pounded on the door with the side of his fist.
“Hello? Anybody home? Our car’s stuck down the road, we could use some help!”
Nothing answered but the rain. He knocked again, waited, then tried the knob. It turned easy in his hand, unlocked, and the door swung inward on a dark front room.
“Hello?” I called past him. “We’re not trying to break in, we just need help getting out of the storm.”
Still nothing. We stepped inside anyway, dripping onto floorboards that hadn’t felt a mop in years, and it only took a few seconds for the truth of the place to settle over both of us. Dust thick on every surface. Furniture draped in sheets gone gray. A broken window in the kitchen letting the storm blow sideways across rotted linoleum. No lights that worked when Josh tried a switch out of habit. No phone anywhere in sight, not even an old rotary one gathering dust on a table.
“I don’t think anyone’s lived here in a long time,” I said.
Josh grabbed the flashlight anyway and walked through every room to be sure, checking closets, checking behind doors, checking a root cellar that turned out to be nothing but empty shelves and a dead water heater.
“Nobody home,” he said, coming back to the front room. “No phone, no truck, nothing. But at least it’s dry.”
“Better than the car,” I said. “I’ll go grab the sleeping bags and the packs. No way I’m trying to sleep at that angle.”
We slogged back out to the SUV together, hauling ourselves up onto the high side to dig our gear out of the trunk, and it took both of us to wrestle the bags and packs and Cooper’s leash free without sliding down into the mud pooling against the low side of the car. By the time we got back to the farmhouse, we were soaked through all over again, but at least we had dry bedding and a working flashlight, and I told myself that was enough to make the night bearable.
Josh got a small fire going in the hearth using broken furniture slats while I laid out the sleeping bags on the cleanest patch of floor I could find.
He pushed the front door shut and worked the old iron deadbolt into place. It took some effort — he had to lean his shoulder into the door and jiggle the bolt before it finally slid home with a heavy, grinding click. I remember watching him do it and thinking that lock hadn’t been used in years. It fought him the whole way.
“That thing’s stiff,” I said.
“Yeah. Warped frame, probably.” He stepped back, satisfied. “It’s locked, though.”
Cooper wouldn’t leave my side. That was the first real wrong thing, if I’m ordering the wrong things by when I noticed them. He didn’t explore the house the way dogs usually do in a new place, nose down, sniffing every corner. He sat pressed against my leg, so close I could feel him trembling, ears pinned back, eyes fixed on the front door like he was waiting for something to come through it. I offered him a piece of jerky from my pack. He wouldn’t even look at it.
“He’s just spooked from the storm,” Josh said, settling in near the fire.
“Yeah,” I said. “Probably.”
I didn’t believe it even then. I just didn’t have anything better to believe.
The deadbolt clicked open on its own about twenty minutes later.
We both heard it — that same heavy metallic sound, but backward, sliding free instead of sliding home. Josh got up, checked the door, found it unlocked exactly the way it had been before he’d forced it shut.
“Didn’t latch all the way, I guess,” he said, and locked it again, putting his shoulder into it like before.
Ten minutes after that, it happened again.
Click.
Josh checked the hinges this time, ran his flashlight along the frame, pressed his palm flat against the door and pushed to see if the wood was warped enough to work the bolt loose on its own. He couldn’t find anything wrong with it.
He forced the bolt home again.
About fifteen minutes later.
Click.
The deadbolt slid open a third time.
Josh stared at it without moving. Cooper’s whining had turned into something lower, something closer to a growl, and his eyes stayed fixed on the door like he could see straight through it.
“Okay,” Josh said quietly. “That shouldn’t be happening.”
He forced it locked again anyway, out of habit more than confidence, and didn’t touch it again after that.
I didn’t say what I was thinking, which was that I didn’t think it was the wind, or the wood, or a warped frame. I didn’t have a better explanation. I just knew that one didn’t feel true anymore.
That’s when we heard the crying.
It was faint at first, threading in under the sound of the rain, and for a second I told myself it was some trick of the wind through the broken window. But it kept going, steady and small, unmistakably a baby’s cry, coming from somewhere out past the porch.
Josh was on his feet before I’d even finished processing it. “Someone left a baby out there.”
“In this? Josh, there’s nothing out here for miles. Who would—”
“I don’t know, but it’s crying, Katie.”
Cooper started barking, sharp and frantic, throwing himself against my legs, trying to physically push me back and away from the door. His tail was tucked so tight it had disappeared between his legs. I had never seen him like that. Not once, not with the vacuum, not with fireworks, not with anything.
The crying never seemed to get any closer. It stayed somewhere beyond the porch, just inside the tree line. It always sounded the same distance away.
It just kept crying.
Josh grabbed the flashlight from the mantel.
“Someone has to check.”
“Josh… wait.”
“If that’s really a baby, Katie—”
He started toward the door.
Without thinking, I grabbed his arm.
“Don’t.”
He looked back at me, confused.
“What?”
“Just listen.”
He frowned.
“For what?”
“The crying.”
We both stood perfectly still.
That’s when I realized what had been bothering me.
It hadn’t changed.
Not once.
No gasping breaths.
No pauses.
No hiccups.
No exhaustion.
The exact same pitch.
The exact same rhythm.
Over and over, like a recording looping in the dark.
I felt my stomach drop.
“Josh…”
My voice barely came out.
“That’s not a baby.”
Cooper suddenly lunged between Josh and the door, growling so low I felt the vibration through the floorboards.
He wasn’t protecting us from something inside the house.
He was trying to keep us from going outside.
I watched something change in Josh’s face. He doesn’t scare easy. He’s the guy who talks down aggressive dogs at the dog park, who once climbed onto a stranger’s roof in a thunderstorm because their cat wouldn’t come down. But I watched the color leave his face as he really listened to that sound for the first time, and understood what I meant.
The crying stopped.
Not faded. Stopped, mid-note, like someone had lifted a needle off a record.
The silence afterward was worse than the crying had been.
Even the rain had stopped.
Then, from just beyond the door: three knocks. Slow. Deliberate. Spaced out enough that each one had time to fade before the next came.
Knock.
Knock.
Knock.
Cooper exploded into barking, but he wasn’t barking at the door anymore. He’d turned, all his attention thrown toward the black window and the tree line beyond it, barking at the woods themselves like something was standing just past where our flashlight beam gave out, watching.
Neither of us moved toward that door again.
We sat by the dying fire for what felt like hours, not talking much, Cooper wedged between us with his chin on my knee and his eyes open the whole night. At some point, the deadbolt slid open one final time, slow, almost gentle compared to the others, and the front door eased inward a few inches on its own.
Neither of us got up.
Beyond the gap, there was nothing. No small shape on the porch, no footprints, no movement at all. Just darkness, dead still, and the shape of the tree line barely visible against a sky just beginning to lighten at its edge.
Cooper growled at the woods one more time, low and final, the sound trailing off the way it does when something is walking away rather than coming closer.
Then nothing. Just the fire, and the silence, and the two of us waiting for a sunrise that took far too long to come.
Morning arrived ordinary, in the unfair way mornings sometimes do after a night like that. Birds going about their business. The sky clear, like the storm had never happened at all. No footprints in the mud outside the door, no sign that anything or anyone had come near the house at all.
The front door stood wide open, the way it had been left sometime before dawn.
We hiked the quarter mile back to the SUV in silence, got a tow truck out from town by early afternoon, and neither of us said much about the house on the drive home. What was there to say that wouldn’t sound insane out loud?
About a week later, we stopped at a little diner off the highway on our way back from visiting Josh’s parents. I don’t even know why I brought it up — something about the mountains outside the window reminded me, and I mentioned the abandoned farmhouse to our waitress, an older woman with silver hair pinned back, just making conversation while she topped off our coffee.
She went still.
“You hear a baby crying?” she asked.
I nodded slowly. I hadn’t described anything close to that. I’d just mentioned the house.
She set the coffee pot down on the table, like she suddenly didn’t trust her hand to hold it.
“My grandma used to tell us kids…”
She looked out the window toward the mountains.
“If you hear a baby crying out there after dark…”
She looked back at me.
“It ain’t a baby.”
I waited. Josh had gone quiet across from me.
“Whatever you do,” she said, “don’t go looking for it.”
“Why?” I asked.
“Because you might not come back.”
“Did your grandma ever say what it was?” I asked.
The waitress shook her head.
“My grandma never would say.”
Author’s Note: This story was inspired by an experience shared by my grandmother when she was a young girl. While the events and characters in this story are fictional, the account of an abandoned house, a mysteriously opening door, frightened animals, and the sound of a baby crying in the night has been passed down through my family for generations.
If you’d like to learn more about the folklore that inspired this story—including the real family account behind it—you can read The Mimic: The Terrifying Urban Legend That Imitates Human Voices.
© 2026 Karen Cody. All rights reserved. This original story was written exclusively for the Urban Legends, Mystery, and Myth blog. Do not copy, repost, or reproduce without permission. This tale may appear in a future special collection.
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